Looks interesting and the presentation and detail are great. My eye is not completely sure what to focus on though... The colors are quite muted, so I'd either suggest making them stronger, or trying a B&W edit.
To some people I might be known as the worlds biggest fan on enlarging lenses... so of course I'm curious: Which 50 mm enlarging lens did you use and do you have some more sample images of the (formerly) quirky character, perhaps one with more background?
I've posted quite a few shots with my unique/quirky ELs (for example a Meopta Belar or a Steinheil V-Cassarit) in the Adapted lens talk forum, so if you ever want to drop by there, I'm always happy about anyone who uses ELs as taking lenses. We still are a minority, I guess. 😅