I'm afraid these aren't pressing my buttons.
1. Doesn't have enough details or distinctive enough forms within the dark area to start to register with me.
2. Is more interesting because of your story and the "open mouth" shape. Getting an exposure at 1/10 at the moment of a lightning flash (ie., it wasn't a time exposure) is quite rare. The foregound areas are lit up but I can't see anything there that gets my attention.
Storm shooting with lightning is like that. I've wasted far far more pixels and silver grains trying to get shots in conditions like this than I care to think about. My successes have been very very rare.