• Members 523 posts
    May 5, 2023, 6:24 p.m.

    Thanks so much, Mike!

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    May 5, 2023, 9:37 p.m.

    Thank you - no vibration there, just bokeh from an old lens.

    Many thanks! Yes, these are indeed some guitar strings, but they are still, just out of focus and part of them illuminated by (natural) light.

    Thanks a lot, that's very kind! I get quite a bit of positive feedback, whenever I decide to share a B&W image... my struggle is internal. Most of the time I feel like an image is loosing something by getting rid of color. I get that it can be an effective tool to highlight other aspects, but I often think I could do those somewhat effective in color as well... might just be a misconception though. I'm certainly not very good at 'thinking in B&W' so maybe I just need to train that. I don't even know if the Canon R5 still has that B&W in-body feature the 5D IV had... need to check that.

    And yes: It's a guitar... my electric guitar to be precise, because unlike lenses, I only got one! 😉

  • Members 1662 posts
    May 5, 2023, 9:39 p.m.

    Really like your shot and I fully appreciate your ability to spot the interplay of light and shadows like that. I'm sure I'd miss it. Excellent work!

  • Members 1662 posts
    May 5, 2023, 9:51 p.m.

    I really like the shot you chose, it's very effective and unusual enough for a musician's portrait to get your attention. I think it works perfectly, if that's what Karina wants and identifies with. In any other case the outtake above is great as well in my opinion as a more standardized/customary but still very professional alternative. (But what do I know about portraits... nothing, really, I'm afraid! 😅)

  • Members 663 posts
    May 5, 2023, 11:25 p.m.

    Gasp

    Get a grip! One guitar?! How do you play more than one song!?

    Better get working on that. At least several electrics (Strat, Les Paul at the minimum), Tele, at least one acoustic, nylon string . . .

    My wife rolls her eyes and asks when I say I need another guitar, "Will I be able to hear the difference between that one and the ones you already have?," I say, "No . . . but I will!"

    😉

    Rich

  • Members 132 posts
    May 5, 2023, 11:31 p.m.

    Maybe it's good to show the color version as well, but maybe not. Anyway this is the color version.

    Lou

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    JPG, 1.2 MB, uploaded by LouHolland on May 5, 2023.

  • Members 132 posts
    May 5, 2023, 11:51 p.m.

    My contribution has disappeared because of my mess and because I wanted to add the color version, but also because I wanted the two photos under each other. Which didn't work out. So if someone can guide me in this respect I feel very obliged and I can still make my contribution in this way. Thanks.

    Lou

  • Members 1662 posts
    May 6, 2023, 12:08 a.m.

    I know, I know... Well, I got an acoustic guitar too, the one from back when I was five and started playing guitar. And I got other instruments as well. Finally I'm not a good guitar player, so it would not feel right. I do have fun shooting some details of those instruments though:

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    Not a star on my guitar...
    by simple.joy, on Flickr

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    Keys to happiness. Keys to despair.
    by simple.joy, on Flickr

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    Pianist writing music on a guitar...
    by simple.joy, on Flickr

  • Members 1383 posts
    May 6, 2023, 12:18 a.m.

    We can see the color version it if we click on the thumbnail. You can go back and make it show up larger in your post by going to Edit, then clicking the two little overlapping boxes on the left of the preview screen, and you should see the code for the image come up. Then click Preview and see if the image shows up. Then you can add the black and white version back in and click the two little boxes for it too. Let us know if that doesn't work and we will figure it out together!

    You can check the preview to make sure it is turning out the way you want before you click "edit reply" to post it. I'm not sure which image is causing the broken paper clip, but if you can't make it go away this way, you can remove all the images but leave the text, then add them back one at a time. The system won't take an image more than 4 mb so that can sometimes trigger problems. Let us know!

    PS - I still like the monochrome best!

  • Members 979 posts
    May 6, 2023, 12:58 a.m.
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    May 6, 2023, 2:01 a.m.

    The backyard physicist in me had decided that that was a great view of vibrating strings. And that the sharp edges were correct in that the string is briefly stationary at the edge of it's movement. Although what looks like a triangular shape was a touch confusing - but also knowing the plane of vibration could possibly rotate around the axis of the string...

    After now having my bubble burst, I am intrigued to learn about what sort of lens would produce sharp bokeh. A google search only showed up a dutch for sale site with no details about it. Do you know much about the lens you could share?

  • Members 979 posts
    May 6, 2023, 3:09 a.m.

    Speaking of bursting bubbles...

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    Lucky non-premeditated shot taken from my phone some weeks ago

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    JPG, 1.0 MB, uploaded by Bryan on May 6, 2023.

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    May 6, 2023, 4:29 a.m.

    Thanks Paula. Timing on these images is everything and anticipating that is the key. This was with the old noisy EM1 and I was very pleased with the way it turned out. I really did not do all that much to the image to get it to the state as presented. Most of what was done was to right the wrongs from shooting more from the left side of the stage than the centre. That did require some intervention to get the left most dancer to not appear in front of a curtain that came down that side of the image.

    I have been having some serious pain from back issues so I have not a lot of time to sit in front of the computer and give responses. I did see your image and really did not have anything of merit to offer. For whatever reason Linda's flip of the image made it better for me. Who would have guessed! I have flipped images on occasion but rarely to improve their appeal. Makes you wonder about all the images one takes!

    Andrew

  • Members 567 posts
    May 6, 2023, 4:38 a.m.

    I think you found out Lou! You just edit your post, select what you want to delete by highlighting it and then delete it. You can not delete or withdraw the post however so the title will remain and you may have to insert some text in the post. I am not sure about the last part. I have tried to delete a post before and at this point in time it can not be done by the poster. One of the admin team members can delete the post for you if you wish to do that.

    I liked the image as presented in monochrome but the colour version is also attractive. Using this site to do what you want can be frustrating. Hopefully it will improve over time.

    Andrew

  • Members 118 posts
    May 6, 2023, 10:41 a.m.

    As has already been said it is an excellent shot.
    In my opinion the dancer on the left hurts the aesthetics of the composition, have you considered removing it?
    I know it's a controversial procedure, I avoid doing it myself but in this shot I would.

  • Members 1383 posts
    May 6, 2023, 12:48 p.m.

    The lighting is pretty wonderful on all of them. I actually prefer the first out-take to the original one submitted. The same general angle is taken but no part of the instrument intrudes on her lip.

    The way you've shot close is interesting to me. I have a young cousin who plays in the local symphony and I've been taking photos of him with his violin since he was 14. I've always wrangled with how much of the violin I need to include and in what way. My own style (which I refer to as Kitchen-Sink style) involves lots of context, also known as too-much-stuff-in-the-frame, so I'd never have thought of such as this.

    The gentleman's image is quite nice as well, again with kudos to the lighting.

  • Members 1383 posts
    May 6, 2023, 12:55 p.m.

    I like the general idea of enhancing the lion statue, which might have been of minimal interest on its own, with color and some kind of simplifying effect. However, the intensity of colors rattles my brain a bit, and as I have mentioned in other responses (perhaps your photos, but not sure) magentas and purples don't have any appeal to me so I'm an unfair judge of images that are heavy in that end of the spectrum.

  • Members 1383 posts
    May 6, 2023, 12:59 p.m.

    You may not be a famous musician but you've found some interesting ways to use selective focus to creat images of them. (BTW I admire anyone who can make their own music instead of having to rely on Spotify).