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    May 14, 2023, 1:30 p.m.

    [quote="@RoelHendrickx"]
    Scotland 4.0 aiming for Scotland 5.0

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    Very joyful shot.

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    May 14, 2023, 1:31 p.m.

    Very keen eye you have. Brilliant.

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    May 14, 2023, 1:34 p.m.

    [quote="@JimKasson"]
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    Very cool and imaginative shots. Brilliant.

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    May 14, 2023, 1:37 p.m.

    Very real, simple and impactful shot.

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    May 14, 2023, 1:38 p.m.

    Very imaginative. Excellent.

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    May 14, 2023, 1:40 p.m.

    Love your pp. Almost early film era...

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    May 15, 2023, 2:56 p.m.

    The lovely rose top center is nicely rendered with sharp waterdrops and petal and leaf detail. The remainder lies in various states of blur which look like the result of a specialty lens, perhaps your lens baby. I'm pretty sure the lens baby didn't handle the color alterations so I'm assuming some kind of physical or digital filter.The muted pastels render a pleasant look. I do think the lower half-flower is unnecessary and perhaps a distraction because of its location, and, well, because of its half-ness if that is a real word.

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    May 15, 2023, 3 p.m.

    You are able to create interesting images with precision sharpness utilizing everyday stuff found around the house. I admire your project for its originality and its success. The bottlecap is so darned sharp we can see the markings of the metal press that punched it out. Allowing blur to overtake all the rest was a good choice in my opinion, so that don't get lost in the detail.

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    May 15, 2023, 3:16 p.m.

    I did it this way because the original shot was something I saw a shot very fast with a wa setting. This gave some extremetilting to the verticals. Straightening them caused problems at the top so I cropped as shown. In time I might get around to either playing with the original more or using the bottom edge to make a top.

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    May 15, 2023, 3:32 p.m.

    Back in the old days on DPR we usually responded to comments made on our photos with ease, using the threaded view that let us keep all the comments in order. This is my first attempt to do such a thing here, where threaded view is not (yet) available. Bear with me if I accidentally miss someone. This is an experiment and like all experiments, can go awry.

    SimpleJoy, Thank you for that! You voiced my intention about the sunlight and the dark trees better than I might have.

    Thank you!

    Perhaps so or at least a gradient right to left. As you and I have discussed our bright pretty monitors sometimes deceive us!

    Opinions are all any of us have to offer and I appreciate yours, which offers details into the why's of your opinions. Anyone who takes the time to look at our images and respond is giving us a gift, so thank you! Also, welcome to the weekly critique thread. Hope you'll visit more, and share some of your own images too. I have been accused before of taking complicated photos when simple ones would suffice. The purple? yes, perhaps but with some intent as I am trying to make friends with purple, my least favorite color.

    Thanks Linda, mundane landscapes can sometimes be dressed up by light.

    I tried what you describe and liked it, so thanks! Yes, me and the purple. I keep trying to befriend it.

    Thank you so much Jared and welcome to the Wednesday critique thread! Please come back for more visits, and bring some of your own photos with you!

    Thanks Chris!

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    May 15, 2023, 8:53 p.m.

    This was a Hoya R72 on a Voigtlander color ultron 50mm. Framing was a matter of focus distance, unfortunately. The blur could be wind or a 1.8 aperture.

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    May 15, 2023, 11:22 p.m.

    *I prefer the interpretation by Rich. The smaller number of horizontal lines and especially the continuation of the lines as they bend around curves and make their way back, creates more interesting forms than the straight lines truncated at each end in the second shot. I'm glad that the second shot was posted, it made it easier to explain what I was liking in the first shot.
    You need a good eye to see the possibilities for a photo in a mundane subject. I enjoy shots that make me look at the everyday and open my eyes.
    Sometimes photos need words to give context. With this image Rich I feel that your text is superfluous. If it can be done, maybe let the viewer enjoy making the associations for themselves. * [/quote]

    Thanks!

    Rich

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    May 15, 2023, 11:26 p.m.

    Thanks!

    Rich

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    May 16, 2023, 4:04 p.m.

    Dear all,

    We are slowly winding down after another succesful week.
    I've enjoyed many of the images and much of the discussion, even if I have participated a bit less that usual.
    (I am in the middle of a photo job that takes a lot of my time.)

    The thread hadsgone a bit quieter in recent hours/days.
    That is not unusual for our weekly gathering.
    Tuesday is often a slower day, winding down and replying to messages and comments.
    Everybody is gearing up of tomorrow's new edition.

    Please be advised that if you want to post another image, it is often better to wait until the new edition on Wednesday.
    This is good for the poster in order to get more traffic.
    And also for the group, in order not to confuse the different sequential weekly threads

    I will take care of starting the new edition tomorrow before noon (Brussels time).
    Most often, I manage to get it online between 8.00 AM and 10.00 AM (again : Brussels time).
    Tomorrow I will either be very early (before 7.45 AM) or a bit later (probably after 11.00 AM) because I have some chores between 8.00 and 11.00AM

    See you then.