• Members 1517 posts
    Aug. 5, 2023, 6:45 a.m.

    These aren't the carefully posed studies for the official folio. These are candid moments where "the party" is as much the subject as the couple. They are shots that the group will look back at in years to come and remember what was being chatted and laughed about at the time.
    They bring back personal memories to me of a different kind. Permit me to wander a little here but it's relevant to something I want to say about them technically.
    Many years ago in B&W film days I did wedding photos for a while. I wasn't good at it. Lou's photos here avoid a mistake I made and never forgot. In the shots are plenty of shadows. It can be concluded that it is either sunny or close to it. The big big problem for wedding photographers is to get details in that so important white dress while not having the groom's dark suit look like a flat black shape. Control of contrast is critical. I failed badly, but that's another story. Ever since I have always gone to the contrast and those two areas in any wedding photos.
    Lou's shots look a little dark and I suspect that he has added vignetting to bring attention to the central areas of the photo where he wanted us to look. It has worked. A little dark they might appear but he has the details that are important in wedding photos. I wish I could have said the same.

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    Aug. 5, 2023, 8:19 a.m.

    A beautifully selected position for the things that make up this landscape. The diamond like frame around the shoreline, the buildings, and the reflection works very well to lift the promised comforts out from the wet green stuff. The pink building is a gift here. It may be overcast but we still feel that a walk here would be worthwhile.
    The cloud shapes and sizes balance up with similar forms in the foreground. Add the brighter foliage front right and check the blue patch above. The walk is too enticing to miss and we'll take a brolly. It's an optimistic image.

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    Aug. 5, 2023, 8:29 a.m.

    Now I'm really curious Why Not. Your edit has done a lot more than a simple change of tones. It's a whole new story. I was slow in picking up on the repositioning of the bench. I can't see this any longer as a runner having a rest on a hot day. You don't wade out through the water for a rest like that. Neither can I imagine a tide coming in on a body of water like that. The inference is that the person has been there for some time. This gets sinister.

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    Aug. 5, 2023, 8:41 a.m.

    Add me to those in agreement.
    Nothing dramatic or intrusively creative here. An appropriately calm and carefully composed image of a beautiful and quiet corner of a pond.
    The single foreground leaf leads to two redder leaves which branch along the underwater stems to unite the pinks. An elegant, understated composition that is worth studying.

  • Members 1517 posts
    Aug. 5, 2023, 9:03 a.m.

    That's a Wow!
    A portrait with attitude. He's confident and direct. It isn't a formal pose, he's relaxed in his clothes and space. Cap medallion, silver pendant, watch, earring stud, purple top. The repetition of some of those elements underlines them. The golds, blacks and purple are a surprising and confident colour scheme. They are extremely effective in framing and complementing his dark skin.
    In some previous posts I couldn't find reason for what you did. Not this time.
    Full marks Open Cube. I'd like to see more of your portraits.

  • Members 945 posts
    Aug. 5, 2023, 9:46 a.m.

    Wet, Wet, Wet
    It's raining today, just a boring expanse of grey cloud and continuous light drizzle :-(
    It was also raining about a week or so ago, and in between too.
    But at least, on those occasions, it was a little bit more exciting than today

    Here's some from around the garden.

    Patiently watching the rain
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    Splish splash on the coffee table
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    just a wet table
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    JPG, 2.8 MB, uploaded by Fireplace33 on Aug. 5, 2023.

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    JPG, 3.0 MB, uploaded by Fireplace33 on Aug. 5, 2023.

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    JPG, 3.3 MB, uploaded by Fireplace33 on Aug. 5, 2023.

  • Members 1517 posts
    Aug. 5, 2023, 10:39 a.m.

    It isn't an everyday combination but purples against greens always feel classy and right. Check Wimbledon.
    As flower shots go, this is unusual. The flower floats above the background. We have no sense of the rest of the particular plant that supports the bloom. This is striking. The composition again is so symmetrical and centred that its perfection has become unusual. I have to admit though to a liking for the petal at around 10.00 that refuses to conform. The dark petal tips fade into the centre and take our eyes along at the same time. I'd guess that it does exactly the same for bees.

  • Members 1662 posts
    Aug. 5, 2023, 10:56 a.m.

    Yes - just a little bit of gaussian blur and a slight reduction of magenta in the reds of the background.

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    Aug. 5, 2023, 11:06 a.m.

    I was thinking about a response to Pete's shot while I was scrolling through to see what I might have missed and I came across Simplejoy's thoughts.
    Did I agree or not that the window was too bright? It's a good question and I took a lot of time and revisiting of the shot before reaching a position.
    I like it as is. The brightness gets our attention, as it does the attention of the figure. It's a little indistinct. It can't quite be read or intepreted. It attracts but needs to be studied. Our figure is composed of the forms and shapes of human knowledge. Science, maths and language. The window hints of something that operates on a dfferent level that still attracts and intrigues the humanoid.
    Absolutely loaded with interpretive possibilities.
    There are very few pixels at work here. A photo with far more space than content. Ethereal, as Simplejoy suggests.
    Can't you see the photographer thinking about the angle here? Left or right a bit? Up a little, maybe down. He nails it with the diagonal filling corners and the shoulder/neck curve and its correlation to the lower right corner of the window. The frame is filled but it full of light and space and the relationship between the two shapes established.

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    Aug. 5, 2023, 11:17 a.m.

    It's the same here as well unfortunately. Hope we'll get a break from the rain soon.

    I like this shot the most - great work capturing a drop like that right in the middle of the pattern and the composition is nice as well!

    I'm glad you don't let the rain stop you from shooting - that's the spirit! If it's really heavy raindrops you've got, one thing I can recommend is getting into the car and shooting the splashes from inside. I once tried something like that, and it was a lot of fun and worked better than I expected:

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    Splashes to splashes
    by simple.joy, on Flickr

  • Members 523 posts
    Aug. 5, 2023, 11:53 a.m.

    For me, this one tellsl the best story - possibly add a plate and cup to indicate an abandoned picnic? Curse that rain! I think the splash on the table is fun and interesting, but requires download and close examination to get the full effect. The "patiently waiting" is fun and unique, though that one could benefit from a closer view possibly? Risk camera damage for your art? Hmmm, maybe not. Hope you see sunshine soon!

  • Members 523 posts
    Aug. 5, 2023, 11:59 a.m.

    Thanks very much, Mike. Even though this photo was taken in early April, I've deleted the original file, so I'm not positive about the neon green. I know when attempting to show Bryan a bit more saturation, I found there is a great deal of yellow and the editing is pretty challenging.

    I have resolved to keep my raw files longer now! I had gone from being overwhelmed with unorganized and unmemorable photos to current state of too lean and spare. Will find a happy balance now that I'm active with your awesome group 😁

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    Aug. 5, 2023, 1:35 p.m.

    Thanks Linda.
    The closer view idea of our "patient gargoyl" works well for me with this crop, thanks for suggesting :-)

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    JPG, 6.0 MB, uploaded by Fireplace33 on Aug. 5, 2023.

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    Aug. 5, 2023, 3:27 p.m.

    Well you made me work this morning .. This picture is a year old which means that I have backed it up and thrown away the layer information. So when I did the changes to brighten and warm I used the JPEG and was finding quick solutions to get back to comment here! . So I suspect I simply used the Brighten and White Balance to make the changes but again I threw away the layer info ... I thought about your comment and went back and worked a bit longer this morning but again with the JPEG but never quite got to where I would have liked if I were going to print this at 16X20, something I never do any more! .....

    I think of the "occupant" as the discovered subject ......... a compositional approach that I sometimes use ..

    I think here you are confused as the "influencer" and the new version with the repositioned bench are both from Simplejoy and his comment .... and it does change the story ...

    Thanks for the detailed critique .. Much appreciated ..

    WhyNot

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    Aug. 5, 2023, 3:56 p.m.

    Oh yes, it sure does! Very glad you posted the crop because, although I have shared suggested edits on other Wednesdays, this change I was seeing only in my mind 😀

  • Members 1662 posts
    Aug. 5, 2023, 6:52 p.m.

    Oh, yeah - sorry @MikeFewster and @WhyNot about the confusion. That edit was just my (heavy handed) attempt at 'changing the story' which was mentioned in an earlier comment. 😉 Of course it wasn‘t a serious suggestion… 😅

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    Aug. 5, 2023, 9:15 p.m.

    I like the feel of these. They convey the feeling of a wet day, of a summer rain falling with some force. The garden looks deserted except for the statue huddled tightly against the precipitation. There could be some fun to be had by taking closer shots of the rain bouncing with some vigor off the various surfaces. My favorite: the stone inlaid object with rain creating big splashes. I yearn for such a day here - Heat index 120, cloudless, not a drop of rain in weeks.