Both the title and photo made me smile! I think the most important aspect of the image's success is that there ae so many little sailboats, and they're all grouped closely together. The cruise ship is obscenely massive, in comparison. I had no idea!
The apprentice (or students in a classroom) theme is great! Kudos for seeing the potential for an engaging photo.
For the majority of my graphics arts career, my job was to illustrate brochures, newspaper/magazine ads, booklets, some books.
Impossible deadlines and expectations. At a moment's notice go out and get professional-quality images to complement the ad-copy. Fill the frame. Simplify. Eliminate extraneous elements. Reduce ambiguity. Use color pleasingly. Use color dramatically. Tell the whole story at a glance. "We need the images yesterday."
That's pretty much the way I see the world and make photographs. This was early evening, during a semi-pro game on Maui. I had the contract to print brochures and schedules for one of the teams. The glove and ball belonged to one of the infielders. It was lying there between innings.
This is an image that is spoilt for me by interference from memories of other images. This is totally unfair to Linda's photo.
Backlighting, the otherworldly green, foliage, lots of black space where things might be lurking. They all have connotations of Halloween and I have to work hard to strip my prejudices away.
The intricate textures through the leaves, their framing by the more dominant branches plus the striking green are what make the shot. The supernatural feeling is hard to avoid as we consider the very bright area. What is it? Then we quickly change to deep blacks. I would have preferred more of the pattern and so I would have cut back the intensity of the strongest highlight area and allowed more detail in the shadows.
Of course, the suggestion of something unnerving might have been exactly what Linda wanted in which case my suggestions are way out of order.
Shot 1. As you say, a classic in great condition. As the subject is the bike and as the background isn't adding anything to the time context, I think you might have chosen the angle a little better. The bench on the right is running into the bike when you really want the bike to stand out. Whoever built the fence did you no favours as the top edge goes right throughthe line of the handlebars. The similarity in the curbing and the concrete edging works well. If you want to try some post processing with some of the newer fangles object removal and replacement tools, try getting rid of the bench and extending the height of the wall upwards.
Shot 2. IBIS here is a tricky decision. I note that it's Sony IBIS and I have had experience with this system. It depends on how securely you had your camera positioned on the rail. If it was on a tripod, IBIS should be off. In this case, it's hard to tell whether or not IBIS would give the best result. It's a dilemma choice I've had too and I might have considered two shots, one with IBIS on and one with it off.
Re the composition, you have a choice. Either zoom in closer to make more of the trails or try to get the whole scene including the yacht, the round tower at the front and the background lights. I like what you have done. It takes in the whole scene with the light trails giving movement to an otherwise still location. The inclusion of the other bits is important to feeling this scene. Possibly take a little off the black sky.
minniev has covered it. The scuffing on the ball was a good pick up. I like the green, green grass that makes the summer connection and also has patterns that connect to the stitching on the ball. Defintely a shot suitable for an ad. or a titling place in a sequence. This tells us that you succeeded in getting a photo that is loaded with meaning.
Really good.
This is really exceptional in terms of colors! I love the balance and feel like it takes an incredible amount of experience and skill to get it right. A bunch of stories told in color... without any need for words, or narrators or over-the-top special effects. I like it a lot!
All over Italy we came across dilapidated old buildings being rebuilt and reborn. Many were clearly not being lived in but they weren't being demolished. I'm guessing that sooner or later they will be renovated. Tourists like the old areas and there's money to be made from renting. The Italians know very well that preserving the atmosphere of the old parts of town are critical for tourism.
I am pretty sure that not too long ago the building on the left would have looked just like the one on the right and that the one on the right will get the treatment in due course.
Once again I'm agreeing with minniev. Number one is a standout. The sky clouds/light give a dramatic framing to the upper structure of the boat. Similar lines from the mooring ropes balance the upper lines and bring the composition together. The "bow bulb" (I'm sure there is a correct nautical term) and the rope and the bow itself, beautifully frame the background docks. Then we have some perfect complementary colours.
The other shots are fine however they are more information shots that build the details about the location as part of a series. Shot one is the standout, stand alone gem.
A photo I didn't appreciate until I read all the responses. It takes time and experience to "process" some of the images shared by this weekly group. I'm grateful for MinnieV's special eye, along with the varied comments and points of view. A great group!
Shot 1. As you say, a classic in great condition. As the subject is the bike and as the background isn't adding anything to the time context, I think you might have chosen the angle a little better. The bench on the right is running into the bike when you really want the bike to stand out. Whoever built the fence did you no favours as the top edge goes right throughthe line of the handlebars. The similarity in the curbing and the concrete edging works well. If you want to try some post processing with some of the newer fangles object removal and replacement tools, try getting rid of the bench and extending the height of the wall upwards.
Shot 2. IBIS here is a tricky decision. I note that it's Sony IBIS and I have had experience with this system. It depends on how securely you had your camera positioned on the rail. If it was on a tripod, IBIS should be off. In this case, it's hard to tell whether or not IBIS would give the best result. It's a dilemma choice I've had too and I might have considered two shots, one with IBIS on and one with it off.
Re the composition, you have a choice. Either zoom in closer to make more of the trails or try to get the whole scene including the yacht, the round tower at the front and the background lights. I like what you have done. It takes in the whole scene with the light trails giving movement to an otherwise still location. The inclusion of the other bits is important to feeling this scene. Possibly take a little off the black sky.
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Thank you for the feedback.
I will be more careful to consider my backgrounds, I forget to do this a lot. I was thinking afterward I should have shot it with the aperture full open to separate from the background better. The bike was on a walkway between a castles inner and outer wall in the old part of Rhodes. I could have asked the owner if he would mind moving the bike. I probably should have taken a picture of him with it..
I haven't invested in a travel tripod yet. This was a moment of opportunity. I pretty terrible at landscapes, so I thought I would try to compose one that included light trails. I wish I had a bean bag or monkey pod. Maybe I will add one to my travel kit.