For me it works a charm.
I am not in the camp of those who think that the dancers are too small in the frame.
The dancers are interesting in themselves, but the context of the temple (and especially the technique of using a reflection in a puddle - really one of my favourite party tricks!!) adds so much more.
I think that probably this would ultimately work best in a series of photographs: one of the whole scene (like you made, cleverly avoiding the spectators for the most part), and then follow-up images of the dancers in true closeup, but also maybe some abstracts of angles on the temple.