Here you go. Just don't look too closely because there are still a few floating wires :)
Though I find this freshly scrubbed version rather boring, I do respect your distaste for all the "stuff" that is common to my corner of the planet, where the contrasts of semi-city and barren countryside and lush commercial orchards are endlessly fascinating to me 😀
I feel like the image works really well as it is and it's a special capture, even more so because it's so real (with all the elements) and yet surreal at the same time! Excellent work!
Just for fun, I've tried to do what you described... not sure if it comes closer to your vision and it's certainly overdone and a different image overall:
It's as far as I was able to get there without loosing the knife's edge completely. Setting it up wasn't hard (as expected), but the challenging thing is getting enough DOF to still make it clear that this is a knife. I would probably need additional 50-80 shots to get anything close to the original. It can be done of course, but takes a considerable amount of time and adds work for post processing clean-up. Also the reflections and shadow on the blade are lost of course, so it would probably be worth it to consider a slightly different lighting to make up for that.
Anyway - thanks again for the suggestion! I was surprised to see that the line-thing could actually work out fine. Wouldn't have guessed it.
Wow! I'm surprised that was so easy for you! I still can't imagine how to do it.
If you ever get a finished product I would love to see it! And if you are willing a "how I did it."
I would totally try and copy it if you didn't mind.
What hasn't changed is your eye for diagonals. Beautifully done here with the lines of tombstones heading to the building. The trees, reducing in size, do likewise. The house adds another shape complementing the tombstones. There's a lot more here as well in the composition and lighting.
It exudes the essence of English countryside and the weight of history.
Colour and line. The rich red lifts from the grey tones. Even when blurred, the line on which it rests is distinct and its diagonal gives tension to the balancing act. The sharp edge where the bead? rests has our attention. Many metaphors become possible. A potent image.
The device between the wall intrigues. It's old, it pivots. What is it? The prominence in the image is offset because too much of it is dark and a little out of focus. Lots of historic building details in the background. I'd have preferred either more of or more detail on the foreground with the background a little out of focus. This might be because I don't recognize the foreground shutterish thing. Those who know what it is might well feel quite differently.
They flew that thing from England to Australia in 1919. It was quite a journey requiring many stops and refuelings. Often they had quite vague knowledge of where the next stop would be and what the landing/refuelling realities would be found once they got there.
I think the front panel was for a crew member to do spotting when landing on dubious terrain. That thing at the front isn't a wheel, it's a kind of skid to come into play if the plane pitches forwards.
Check the timeline for details of the adventures along the way. I think this flight deserves to be far better known. www.adelaideairport.com.au/vickers-vimy/discover/timeline/
I feel the same way about it. I tried to include too much and it loses a clear subject.
The image is looking over a medieval castle's rampart through an arrow defensive piece.
I think I should have used a longer focal length to compress the background into one to three objects and no more, which would have served to reduce the excessive sky and make the wooden arrow defense smaller.
Instead I tried to show the town with it's impressive old churches and the importance on the River. I also used the arrow shutter to hide most of a modern building in the foreground.
The prow of the near boat is 10 feet above the ground. The boats are 50 feet long. I was pressed against the side of the enclosure with a 24-105mm zoom lens at 24mm on an APS-C camera, and this was the best composition I could create. There was nothing I could use for sense of scale in the scene.
These canoes are used for races through the Kaiwi channel between Molokai and Waikiki on Oahu, HI. Such races have taken place for hundreds of years for the pleasure of Hawaiian kings. Legend is that losers of long-ago races lost more than just a day out on the ocean.
The Kaiwi channel is one of the most treacherous bodies of water in the world. Wind and wave energy that travel unchecked over thousands of miles of open North Pacific Ocean between Alaska and Hawaii, creating the highest surf in the world when they slam into the north shores of Oahu and Maui, roar through the 70-mile-wide channel, and can, and often do, capsize such canoes as well as the largest sailboats made.
I met some crew members. All of Samoan-Hawaiian descent. I didn't know such huge human beings existed. Nice guys, though. A team of five easily carried one of the canoes to the water. I couldn't lift even one of the oars.
Flowers that have begun to deteriorate are hard to ignore. The symbolism is all too apparent. When the bloom is as rich and lush as this example, the messages are all the stronger. You got it at the point of maximum impact. The flower is still erect and most of the petal shape survives. The inevitable decay has begun and a viewer feels the full significance. behind the rose, the fresh green heightens the drama.
Yes, the wires are also irritating. I have similar obstructions in my city, though the USA is worse for ugly poles, cables, signs, etc, that completely spoil any beauty that the photo would otherwise have. I remember Stonington, CT, which is a completely disfigured little fishing village. Without the poles and cables it would look like a village in Cornwall from 100 years ago.
Tourists are another bane of my life: they just stop and stand in front of me with their phones, and have no awareness of their surroundings — while I wait to click the shutter!