• Members 1399 posts
    Jan. 29, 2024, 7:28 a.m.

    In one and two, I like what you have done with the fisheye lens.
    In one, the tourists are enveloped by the street. Streets can feel like this when you travel.
    In two, The proximity of the girl on the left means we look at the scene as though we are her and the viewing effect is made even more so as she is adjusting her glasses. Again, the wa cocoons us in the experience. Where are we? the "important engraved writing" is in English and I presume the statue has significance in a stand against tyranny. It's full of classical touches. The ceiling is a straight take from the Pantheon in Rome and there are laurel leaves on the walls.
    Re three. Is this the exterior of the building in two? It looks something like the pillared entrance to The Parthenon? I feel that the figure is too small. Perhaps get in close so the figure and umbrella holds us like the girl on the left in two?

  • Foundation 1494 posts
    Jan. 29, 2024, 7:58 a.m.

    Mike,

    The second picture was taken inside the Jefferson Memorial in Washington DC. The building does have elements in common with the Pantheon. I do not know where the other two photos were taken.

    David

  • Members 149 posts
    Jan. 29, 2024, 4:30 p.m.

    Confirmed:
    1 is in the retail district of Genoa, Italy
    2 is U.S. President Jefferson's Memorial in Washington D.C. (GoPro6)
    3 is Richmond Va State Capitol Building (a6500 18-135)

    for me, the 3 images have an element in common, but I'm not sure it comes across, I am a bit of a wuss when it comes to "getting closer"

  • Members 533 posts
    Jan. 30, 2024, 7:53 a.m.

    The series forms a fine portrait of the town, followed by an even finer portrait of one of its inhabitants.
    The first (which I think is the courthouse, rather than the church?) is shown square on, and so takes on a strong and immovable presence. It is an impressive building.
    The spindly legs of the water tower lead towards the sky, where it holds the name of the town proudly. There is something slightly disconcerting and endearingly odd about the construction, - like a steam-powered space-rocket.
    There are so many leading lines to the Strand. The cables are often a nuisance in photos, but here there are so many that they become a feature. They are almost like the lines depicting speed in a carton, and give a sense of motion. In any case the subject bring feelings of nostalgia.
    In the next, the leading line is a zig-zag, which is probably quite appropriate leading to the church, as few manage to stay on the straight and narrow path.
    Finally, a lovely portrait of a farmer selling his produce the way it should be sold, from the tail-gate of his truck, with no middle-man in sight. I am not surprised he enjoyed receiving his copy.
    I have never been to Kosciusko, but now feel I have flavour of what to expect.

    Pete

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    Jan. 30, 2024, 7:57 a.m.

    You did well in the first to light the bottle holder without causing hot-spots and intense contract on the shiny metal, and the flower has attractive even light. The light-box has certainly passed its test.

    Pete

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    Jan. 30, 2024, 8:08 a.m.

    It is a very graphical subject, with the lines of the trees and bushes contrasting against the slabs of fence and foggy sky. However, some of the fog is caused by being out of focus, as only the tree is sharp. If it was intentional to blur the fence and plant, then I am missing the point. Was it an attempt to introduce depth into a fairly one-dimensional subject? If it was, then it doesn‘t really work for me, which is a shame, as I think the whole thing needs to be sharp to work well in this graphic composition.

    Pete

  • Members 533 posts
    Jan. 30, 2024, 8:26 a.m.

    Yes, this certainly worked right and is a cool photo. It is a good portrait, even if we can only see the back of the man.
    His motorcycle is great, with a pretty unique passenger attached to the back and is itself a great subject.
    There are also some other details, which kept me amused, regardless of whether they were intentional or not.

    The way the helmets and jackets are draped on the bike, it resembles a soldier, dressed in black, pointing a gun at the skeleton, the symbol of death, while everyone else(!) in the photo turns his back and ignores what is going on.

    Tattoos are associated with bikers, and we can‘t see if he has any, but there is one inked on the surface of the road beneath his bike.

    No biker is complete without his “bitch”, and at least she is present in word on the wall where he is sitting.

    The skid marks on the road are very appropriate and in a nice position too.

    Thanks, I enjoyed this one.

    Pete

  • Members 533 posts
    Jan. 30, 2024, 8:44 a.m.

    There is a link of classical architecture running through the series. It is particularly strong in the second two, with their domes and colonnaded grand entrances, but the first has arches too, which are less obvious due to the distracting shop fronts.
    There is also a connection of women taking photographs. They are all small in the frame, but are central in the foreground, so are still recognisable as a theme.

    Pete

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    Jan. 30, 2024, 6:15 p.m.

    Nice architectural images that show size, scope, and scale compared to the tiny tourist figures. The theme of the diverse buildings is held together by the tiny ladies snapping photos of the behemoths. The ultra wide angle works nicely on the first two.

    There was a time when I would wait impatiently for the tourists to clear out so I'd have a "clean" shot. After some years' experience, and a series I dubbed "Little People", I now wait impatiently for a tourist to enter the scene and make it more interesting.

  • Members 1576 posts
    Jan. 30, 2024, 6:22 p.m.

    I thoroughly agree with Pete, and enjoyed all the little details he mentioned. They are small details but taken together they add a massive amount of interpretive material to this image. I tend to interpret the black-clad "figure" more as Darth Vader than a traditional soldier though. The skeleton seat is worth stopping for but the rest is what makes it special. Well done.

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    Jan. 30, 2024, 6:23 p.m.

    Your technique, whatever it may involve, works well with this one, and the colors, while edgy, work marvelously. The rendering of the water and the structures alongside are especially pleasing. Well done.

  • Members 149 posts
    Jan. 30, 2024, 8:47 p.m.

    Thanks for the feedback! It helps me, should I add more description when I post, or just leave it to interpretation?
    The theme I was trying to create with these images was a contrast theme. It was too subtle to connect with the viewer. This is good to know so when I try this again, I do it differently and hopefully connect better.

    In the Genoa Image, the chinese couple was part of my walking tour, and they kept taking these photos of each other, but not in front of anything, just random, playful poses in a crowd. The crowd around them wore dark colors, looked down a lot, seemed to trudge, the street was constantly in shadow with indirect winter sunlight. The stores have neutral colored facades, no neon or lights to get your attention.
    I didn't want to intrude on them, but I think if I had been closer and made them bigger in the image, maybe directly centered in the frame it would have been more obvious.

    The Jefferson Memorial image is similar, there is one person not like the rest. I didn't want to disturb her, she was recording vlogs and giving a short history lesson. All I had was a GoPro because I hadn't decided to make photography a hobby. Every time I took a shot, someone stepped into frame. I chose this one in post because the girl on the left, her arm takes you to her eyes, her eyes take you to the vlogger and Jefferson. Even though the theme was supposed to be contrast, I think it also said something about freedom, to make a vlog in a founding father's memorial where you can just say anything you want, even the Vatican has places where the docents won't let you photo or take selfies.I wonder if Jefferson would be proud of that.

    The last one made me think Mr Smith Goes to Washington or Legally Blonde. The imposing rigidity, black and whiteness of an institution, its building a monument to itself, and then a person in a bright color who just looks up at it, almost as if they are saying how cute, I'm not intimidated, I would have chosen hanging lights...