• Members 1517 posts
    Feb. 11, 2024, 5:46 a.m.

    I needed the title to understand what I was looking at. Then I was able to make some guesses.
    It reeks of old wood and old and heavy machinery. The grinding wheel? I think that is what it is, is especially impressive.Your color range appropriately suggests age and warmth.
    After that, I think there is a bit of a problem. Is it a contemprary portrait of a couple, a vistor and a tradesman, or a study of the mill? The interaction between the couple seems totally divorced from the mill setting. As it stands, they might be on a bridge, by a river- the setting feels irrelevant. At the same time, the girl, while looking happy, doesn't appear to be communication with the man - although he is looking at her.
    In conclusion, There are a number of elements in the picture that offer opportunities but here I don't feel that they are "gelling" into one story for the viewer.
    Of course, if the shot was taken as a record of a particular person and their visit to a particular place and the image was made to share that moment with friends, that's a completely different scenario.

  • Members 937 posts
    Feb. 11, 2024, 8:35 a.m.

    Super.
    This has great lighting and a very nice composition.
    The way that the people in the boats under the bridge appear as dark silouhettes against the golden light, makes that light shine out even brighter.

  • Members 861 posts
    Feb. 11, 2024, 4:13 p.m.

    "Gummy"
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    gummy.jpg

    JPG, 2.3 MB, uploaded by OpenCube on Feb. 11, 2024.

  • Members 820 posts
    Feb. 12, 2024, 12:20 p.m.

    Well crafted brickwork can be just as artistic as any kind of stonecutting and sculpture.
    Bricks may seem a boring and mundane material, but the patterns that can be achieved are endless.
    Too bad that in current buildings, bricks are mostly used for flat vertical surfaces without any imagination.
    Your examples (from Bologna, that I consider as my second alma mater because I have spent half a year there in the final year of University) are eloquent and well chosen. They are also diverse, and are testament to the versatility of the brick : bricks can be used for religious buildings that are more often associated with marble and other natural stones, but also for military/civil purposes and also for embellishments on commercial property. A good sampling, thus.

  • Members 820 posts
    Feb. 12, 2024, 12:24 p.m.

    Unless the situation was really foggy or you had (David Hamilton-esque) a layer of vaseline on your lens, it seems that there has been some softening in PP applied to this image, giving almost a "counter/whiteness"-vignette like you would find on a certain type of wedding portraiture.
    While I don't mind that look, I also don't think that it really adds much.
    If it were mine, I would probably reduce this image to roughly 1/3 of the total surface, cropping from left, from right and from top, to concentrate on waves and birds.

  • Members 820 posts
    Feb. 12, 2024, 12:25 p.m.

    I kinda like the effect (and I am sure that the LGBTQ+X etc community would approve of your colour scheme).
    But it does not grab me as many others of yours do.

  • Members 820 posts
    Feb. 12, 2024, 12:30 p.m.

    I like how you brought out the characteristics of the shapes of the different bridges.

    If you are interesting in bridges and how they are constructed, transported and put into place, you may like a documentary photo series of mine, that was shot over the course of roughly 36 hours in winter 2017, to show the final stages of a bridge replacement.
    I will add the link later. The gallery seems to have been auto-archived on zenfolio, so I will need to restore the link first.

  • Members 820 posts
    Feb. 12, 2024, 12:32 p.m.

    Your title is instrumental (even crucial) in shaping our perception of this image.
    Without the title, it looks like a fun experiment in light and colour.
    The title makes us regard this as an image of human life in early stages, just like what we can see in proud ultrasound images that parents-to-be show their family.
    Cool!

  • Members 820 posts
    Feb. 12, 2024, 12:39 p.m.

    Bhutan...
    Hmmm.
    Never been there.
    Want to go!

    This image could easily have been a standard picture postcard (albeit with a more overcast sky than we would ideally expect in picture postcards) : the grand building sitting amidst greenery, with mountains and clouds behind it and a stream running in front of it. Maybe also that bridge a bit further up (but I would expect the building to be shot straight-on for a picture postcard.
    In fact, if we were to crop this image (maintaining ratio) from just right of the elbow of th man, and from bottom and top, excluding the ledge he is sitting on, then there you have it, that picture postcard.

    Including the man adds a layer, and creates a story. Or multiple stories.
    He is our Everyman over whose shoulder we look, together with him. We see what he is watching.
    Did he come from that building/village, over that far bridge, to this panorama point, to look at his own place from a distance?
    Is this a last look back, upon leaving?
    Or is he a weary traveler who has come from far and is enjoying his first good look at his destination, thankful that he is almost there?

    The story/stories elevate the image.

  • Members 820 posts
    Feb. 12, 2024, 12:42 p.m.

    There is clear joy here.
    The woman in red is enjoying the talk of the craftsman, explaining the workings of his ancient machinery.
    (We seem to have a theme going on, spanning weeks, where women in red are the character of the tourist exploring.)
    The miller is equally enjoying himself with the explanation that he has undoubtedly given countless times but does not get tired of. (Having the attention of a beautiful woman always helps, I suppose.)

    Like you said : it is a moment in time. But an enjoyable one.

  • Members 820 posts
    Feb. 12, 2024, 12:45 p.m.

    Could also have been called "Brace for Impact".
    A great documentary shot of the perfect diving technique that some species develop.
    I love it, not just for the bird, but also for the geometry of the image.
    It is an image that can be used in a classroom instruction on "rule of thirds" and why that is an effective composition tool.

  • Members 698 posts
    Feb. 12, 2024, 1:37 p.m.

    Sorry, replied to the wrong post

  • Members 861 posts
    Feb. 12, 2024, 3:52 p.m.

    "A Light In the Dark"
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    alightinthedark.jpg

    JPG, 1.6 MB, uploaded by OpenCube on Feb. 12, 2024.

  • Members 154 posts
    Feb. 12, 2024, 7 p.m.

    Yeh, they were chatting, being flirty and I saw an opportunity and jumped in and took the photo.

    @MikeFewster makes a good point, the subject isn't totally clear. Clear to me of course, I remember what I saw and why I took it.

    It is a place maintained for educating people about the purpose of Dutch windmills, like Colonial Williamsburg in the USA or Louisbourg Fortress in Canada. I was exploring this one after the gentleman demonstrated how peanut butter was made (on the right). The tour guide, in red, gives this tour frequently so she knows the guy, work colleagues in a sense. After the demonstration we, the tourists, are free to wander while they chat 'by the water cooler.'
    Their body language told this story of how they had crushes on each other but had never said anything. They talked an laughed and tried not to send signals of interest even though they were clearly interested in each other. She's telling a story that isn't quite funny but she loves telling it to him and he is ready to laugh, to be empathetic to whatever she's going to say. She's a little blurry because she was animated as she was talking.

    I had setup my camera for architectural images, big depth of field and slow shutter in a relatively dark space. I just didn't want the moment to go buy and be lost to the aether forever.

    I can't figure out whether to title these images, explain them or just let it stand for itself.

  • Members 154 posts
    Feb. 12, 2024, 7:37 p.m.

    I found Spain Square difficult to shoot. I was there mid-morning and the light seems to fall over it at the wrong angle. Plus, soo much orange brick with these more subtle blue and green tiles. After I saw your image, I spent 3 days this week re-editing my photos of this place to see if I could get one I liked. -sigh- It is going to snow tomorrow, I know what I'll be doing.

    I like that you were able to get so many of the details that make the structure so interesting. The orange light of the late sun and the orange brickwork really draws your attention. I love the silhouettes of the people in the boats.
    I wish the bridge wasn't in shadow, the tile work is a point of interest to me and the highlighting from the low angle sun really pulls you away to the background and I think I could almost miss it.

  • Members 154 posts
    Feb. 12, 2024, 7:43 p.m.

    I love the converging lines of the second image, gives it a sense of being very tall.

    In the third image, was the Desigual logo backwards or was the Modernissimo logo backwards in real life? Edit: caught up to your reply when Pete asked a similar question. Something I didn't know about the company, thanks!

  • Members 1517 posts
    Feb. 12, 2024, 8:39 p.m.

    Re titles.It is always a dilemma and there is no always correct answer. Sometimes a title is witty and the title is enjoyed for itself.
    Sometimes A title can result in tunnel vision and confine the viewer's response. Of course, what one viewer might find confining might not be seen that way by another.
    Sometimes a title is needed to give a clue that assists the interpretation.
    I wouldn't worry about it. Add titles as it feels appropriate to you.

  • Members 820 posts
    Feb. 13, 2024, 7:38 a.m.

    Here is that link that I promised:

    roelh.zenfolio.com/p812249683

    Sample image:

    roelh.zenfolio.com/img/s/v-10/p3650434957-6.jpg

  • Members 1330 posts
    Feb. 13, 2024, 12:24 p.m.

    Thank you Roel. Absolutely incredible feat of engineering. Your shots revealed it all.
    Night captures are truly amazing.

  • Members 543 posts
    Feb. 13, 2024, 1:06 p.m.

    Yes, it could be an embryo in a womb, but it could be other things too and thinking about that is what makes the image.
    No matter what the viewer sees in it, the image has pleasing haves and colours, which makes it a peaceful experience.

    Pete

  • Members 543 posts
    Feb. 13, 2024, 1:21 p.m.

    A moment in time. We see two people who are interacting with each other, and, judging by their expressions, it seems to be an enjoyable experience. However, he is looking directly at her and she is looking somewhere else. Has the enjoyable moment in time just finished? Was the exchange between them a compliment, or a friendly or even witty remark? Or did they have a more substantial conversation? We don’t know, and it is unimportant. What is important is that the photo triggers us to have these thoughts and spend time with it.
    The background is very cluttered, but is that a problem? I don’t think so, as the people are still easily seen and the background is important to give a sense of place and give a sense of brevity to the meeting. Had this been a plush café, it would probably have led us to believe the metering had been longer , more intimate.

    Pete

  • Members 543 posts
    Feb. 13, 2024, 1:26 p.m.

    The grasses are nice and sharp, which I think is important for the photo to work. The colours are attractive, and so is the arrangement of the grasses. The background is unusual, with the rectangle of out of focus objects with similar colours to the grasses and the black, but it works well.

    Pete

  • Members 861 posts
    Feb. 13, 2024, 1:33 p.m.

    Considering the original source is kinda nightmare fuel, that is funny.

  • Members 760 posts
    Feb. 13, 2024, 8:50 p.m.

    Minnie, Mike and Pete,

    Thanks so much for the comments.

    Rich