Obviously edits like I did are very subjective and open to interpretation by whoever is doing the editing.
Some will like them and some will not.
Boat, canal edges, and the houses create lines that all converge at the end of the canal. The clouds are radiating out from much the same point and it holds the image together. The point of convergence has enough brightness to lift it. While the barge is the subject, all the convergence plus that touch of brightness suggest the travel is to that point.
The bow of the canoe is tied to a mooring and with the canoe's stern pointing towards the bottom of the image the canal's water is flowing away from the point of convergence.
If the canoe was my subject I would put as much light as practical onto it in post.
Yes, the suggested brightening adds impact. But does it fit better with the subject?
Imo, yes because it makes the canoe stand out more.
I prefer the boat's emergence from the darker area of the original. Overall impact isn't everything.
For me, the overall impact an image has on me plays a very large part in what I think of it and how I edit it.
For example, you could photograph a Rembrandt and give it more screen impact by brightening the whole thing. Would it be better?
For some people yes, for some people no.