• Members 1585 posts
    Nov. 15, 2024, 2:55 a.m.

    Wonderful capture. I've never caught one hauling sticks. I've seen them but never when I had a camera in hand. Is this a courting stick or a building stick? If it's a courting stick, it isn't very impressive. He's beautiful, and I love his golden eye.

  • Members 711 posts
    Nov. 15, 2024, 2:58 a.m.

    Minniev,

    Thank you.

    Thank you.

    Thank you!

    Rich

  • Members 1585 posts
    Nov. 15, 2024, 3 a.m.

    Both are quite nice, well taken images that could stand alone or be considered as a themed set. The bee photo has both plant a creature, with great detail and color. And the leaf is just lovely with its unusual color structure, flowing lines, and that tiny piece of spiderweb. Well done.

  • Members 1416 posts
    Nov. 15, 2024, 4:11 a.m.

    I like the bee shot too. Stacks of fine detail on the bee. The background flowers should be noted as well. They play a big part in the success of the image. Varying degrees of soft focus but all are recognizable and show the host flowers in different stages of opening. They add information without detracting from the main flower/bee. The soft focus., radiating leaves and stems do like wise and bring everything together.
    The Autumn leaf is different. Nice colours and textures but the shape and positioning don't appeal to me in the way the first shot holds me. I like the fine strand of cobweb that minniev pointed out but it is overwhelmed by the rest of the leaf. To me.

  • Members 1416 posts
    Nov. 15, 2024, 4:24 a.m.

    Lisbon Street. Version 2.
    I straightened the left hand side a little and made further colour adjustment.
    The lower orange angle is correct. The orange line follows steps that are sloping down a hill.
    I prefer this version.

    Lisbon. Street. Version 2.jpg

    Lisbon. Street. Version 2.jpg

    JPG, 1.8 MB, uploaded by MikeFewster on Nov. 15, 2024.

  • Foundation 1507 posts
    Nov. 15, 2024, 6:45 a.m.

    I like this a lot. I agree with Minnie that cutting off the red vehicle on the extreme right would be an improvement.. Also, the monument and the lamp post are not quite parallel or upright. But I am nit picking!

    David

  • Nov. 15, 2024, 11:50 a.m.

    I like this one much better. The colours round the house doors really complement the reds. My eye follows the red to the blue and yellow and makes me wonder what is further down the road. A picture that leaves you like that is always good.

    Alan

    Alan

  • Members 1264 posts
    Nov. 15, 2024, 12:20 p.m.

    Fairly dramatic improvement over the first edition, not even because we have more colours and shapes and sizes on the adjoining wall. I even like this truncated hockey stick of a shadow on the ground. All the elements play together now. Well done.

  • Members 1264 posts
    Nov. 15, 2024, 12:22 p.m.

    This simplicity of a lovely leaf image always wins.

  • Members 1264 posts
    Nov. 15, 2024, 12:23 p.m.

    Toronto, Ontario, Canada

  • Members 1264 posts
    Nov. 15, 2024, 12:27 p.m.

    Attraction here is the variety of lines and colours all set against glorious blue sky. Well seen.

  • Members 1416 posts
    Nov. 15, 2024, 8:56 p.m.

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    Yep. I took the reposting as an opportunity to spend more time on the PP and reframe as well as reducing the brightness.

  • Members 353 posts
    Nov. 15, 2024, 9:25 p.m.

    This version looks much better and helps convey what the scene looked like.
    And, I like this version.
    But, I think you should invest in a better monitor.
    Deeper shadows would do this photo much better.
    Since you always comment on shadows that should be lightened, it must be something to do with your monitor.
    Your photos are always slightly overexposed to my eye.
    It can't be your camera or the exposure.

  • Members 353 posts
    Nov. 15, 2024, 9:41 p.m.

    I agree with you Allan.
    As for the colors, they are overexposed here, at least the ones that are supposed to make up the photo.

  • Members 353 posts
    Nov. 15, 2024, 9:58 p.m.

    I hope you didn't just take this photo with your iPhone.
    There's a lot more potential that can be achieved with a real camera.
    Very good photo!

  • Nov. 15, 2024, 10 p.m.

    It looks OK on my monitors. So, maybe just accept it is what it is.

    Alan

  • Nov. 15, 2024, 10:01 p.m.

    Phones can take good pictures. Let's not disparage individual kit - or who knows where we will end up.

    Alan

  • Members 353 posts
    Nov. 15, 2024, 10:01 p.m.

    I would like to see and photograph turkeys in the wild.
    That's why they're very interesting for me.