• Members 154 posts
    Nov. 23, 2024, 2:59 a.m.

    I like the first one because the colors have an appealing curve to them and they seem to flow in the same direction.
    The second one for it's angles and patterned texture.

  • Members 154 posts
    Nov. 23, 2024, 3:03 a.m.

    I like the colors and the backlighting highlighting the dark maroon. It helps bring it out from the greens.
    Seems like there are 3 layered tones in these images, have you tried a black and white as a textured image? Maybe cropped to give more detail?

  • Members 154 posts
    Nov. 23, 2024, 3:13 a.m.

    The white vignette doesn't work for me, but I don't like white vignettes, so that's probably just me.
    I like the crop of the second image a lot, I couldn't see the third horse in the first image.
    I would probably crop out the tree and horse on the right, place the two horses on the lower right rule of thirds and let the horses look deep into the image.

    Edit: after reading everyone's comments.
    None of the vignettes are really working for me.
    I don't think there is anything wrong with the first image, someone said boring I think? I would say maybe plain. It lacks deep shadows and colors that pop. The image seems to have a single brightness to me. Is that something that can be done in edit, make the shadows deeper?
    Or am I just seeing it with Instagram eyes? Everything in bright colors and dark shadows?

  • Members 4254 posts
    Nov. 23, 2024, 3:51 a.m.

    I don't normally use strong vignettes or artistic crops for images to be displayed online but I often do when including images in a final video of an event or holiday etc. They add visual interest to the stills included in a video.

    The white vignette doesn't really do much for me in this case.

    This version below is most probably a bit ott but I'm sure you could come up with something in between your originals and this version if you want to.

    I used Photoshop Elements - crop shapes to crop the image and then added a gradient made up of two of the dominant colours in the scene behind the crop. I then added a drop shadow, bevel and inner glow until I got something that looks reasonable to me.

    Anyway, fwiw, just some food for thought.


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    JPG, 296.2 KB, uploaded by DanHasLeftForum on Nov. 23, 2024.

  • Members 4254 posts
    Nov. 23, 2024, 7:03 a.m.

    No, certainly not boring splashes of color.

    I like these very much. The colors and lighting complement each other very well in each of the images.

  • Members 617 posts
    Nov. 23, 2024, 5:10 p.m.

    step-by-step deleted

  • Members 4254 posts
    Nov. 24, 2024, 2:03 a.m.

    It was Alan who suggested his original image seemed boring to him. I agree with you - it is more plain/bland than boring.

    This version works much better for me on my screen with more punch/pop. I think Alan's image would be a great starter image in the "Edit Me An Image" threads here.


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    horses.jpg

    JPG, 336.2 KB, uploaded by DanHasLeftForum on Nov. 24, 2024.

  • Members 4254 posts
    Nov. 24, 2024, 8:21 a.m.

    Crooked horizons are a pet hate of mine and unfortunately it spoils this interesting scene for me.

    This version works much better for me visually.


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    straightenHorizon.jpg

    JPG, 187.6 KB, uploaded by DanHasLeftForum on Nov. 24, 2024.

  • Members 676 posts
    Nov. 24, 2024, 8:37 a.m.

    [quote="@MikeFewster"]

    I'm really liking this photo more than a little! I love the textures, lines, and demured saturation.

  • Members 1646 posts
    Nov. 25, 2024, 2:48 a.m.

    Again, a beautiful bird, well caught in a very nice posture. Your magpies are different than ours, but I see the resemblance. Plenty of detail in the white feathers, always a challenge with birds who have mixed white and dark feathers. I am not a fan of the colored overlay which makes the left side of the tree look muddy, and appears to create or enhance a dark blob just above the bird's head. A nice capture, but I don't like the overlay.

  • Members 1646 posts
    Nov. 25, 2024, 2:50 a.m.

    Nice image with a wealth of fluffy blossoms, likely cherry, and a pleasing coastline. But you really ought to straighten that horizon line before all the water spills out into that park.

  • Members 1646 posts
    Nov. 25, 2024, 3:25 a.m.

    Replying to those who commented on

    Glad the colors "woke up" for you on another screen! The colors were so vivid in real life, but the lighting came from behind and to the left, so it hit the yellow tree more, leaving the red tree in a bit of blue hour still. I was hoping to capture both kinds of light (cold and warm) and the transition between the two. It was tricky business.

    Thank you. The second was the one that came out closest to what I envisioned. The little clump of red and yellow leaves in the middle was picking up a shaft of light that I was intent on capturing. The last one was sort of a surprise once I got home and sorted them out.

    Had not thought of choosing all of them! Thanks!

    Thanks, it was my favorite too, though I first thought it a failure. I ended up liking the cascade effect moving into the green tree behind.

    Thanks, that glow is what stopped me and kept me stopped till the sun rose enough to let the drama subside.

    Thanks for an interesting comment. The swirl effect was all Mother Nature! Glad someone noticed that one bright leaf, because it was the thing that made me stop and engage.

    The idea of a monochrome variation is something I hadn't thought of but will try. Yes, the tonalities varied all through the spectrum.

    Thank you. That's exactly what I was caught by!

    Probably an illusion caused by contrast. #2 is the one that best exhibits what I was trying to capture. The third one was a happy surprise.

  • Members 816 posts
    Nov. 25, 2024, 7:23 p.m.

    That's a wonderful story of a hike.
    It feels like I am up there with you.
    The changing light is very dramatic and you captured it really well.
    There is nothing I would do differently.

  • Members 816 posts
    Nov. 25, 2024, 7:25 p.m.

    The detail in that first image, with the very vivid colour, works well.
    But I still like the second image much better.
    The natural almost monochrome colour scheme makes the textures stand out so well.
    The tenstion and the ripples in the sails evoke their destination: a turbulent sea.

  • Members 4254 posts
    Nov. 25, 2024, 7:32 p.m.

    One thing I would have done differently in #4 is lighten the sky and shadows a little bit.

    The sun is still above the horizon but the overall darkness of the scene makes it look closer to a night scene.