I agree on most points but feel the photographer might have taken a couple of steps to the right. The peak of the tiled roof is a little offset. I'm by no means certain about this but I'd like to have seen peak of the roof a little more centred so we only saw the A of the roofshape perched on the hand rail.
I can see the attraction of the idea but I don't think it quite comes off. There are too many lines going in too many directions. How about cropping it hard and then working with the bridge and more curved elevator lines? Attached is a rough crop of the area I'm talking about. Esit note. Having seen my crop on screen I think the crop should be portrait shaped with more of the dark area below the lowes elevator rail included and more of the left edge removed .
If this place is where I think we are, I can tell you a little more about what they are wearing. Sukhothai is recognized by Thais as a very important birthplace of Thai culture. Many Thai tourists make a special effort to wear more traditional clothes when they visit. In the nearby streets are shops that hire traditional clothes for men and women, usually for walking around the precinct in the evening.
Umbrellas though need to be modern. Torrential Thai rain, searing sun. A modern umbrella is a necessity in Thailand and far more practical than the traditional model. But have a close look at the young lady in yellow. She has another, larger umbrella hooked over her arm as well as the blue one protecting her from the sun. I think the one over her arm is a traditional brolly that has been hired with the dress.
So for me, the photo is all about Thai nostalgia.
Coincidentally Roel, have you seen my photo this week in Street? I was thinking umbrellas as well and the colours are very similar - but mine was taken in Italy.
I like the edge to edge wall of glass and horizontal lines combined with a vertical slit giving a quite different view of the city. It's an interesting reversal of the usual composition that gives more space to the big setting against which something is set. Looking at it large, I think some form of posterization has been applied PP. At first I didn't like the PP but it grew on me. Seen large, the section through the slit looks more PP than the closer building. It seems to suggest the background is less real than the foreground and I began to feel this is appropriate.
Portrait format with lots of long repeating vetical lines always invokes solemnity. The trees are creating the right mood. The lighter stone edges the memorials out from the background. The distance between the angel and the tombstones hints at a story.
It would have been a quite different image if the trees/bushes blocked out the central area of sky. But they don't. There is life and hope in the photo rather than unrelieved solemnity.
Edit addition. After reading Rich 42 seeing his edit. I like the edit, providing the intention is as I suggested above. Of course, that might not have been the intention.
That's excellent minimalism.
It seems to be a Mondrian of just two colour and then one intervention, but actually I really like the subtle gradiants in both colour blocks: the gradual lightening of the blues towards the horizon, and the subtle variation in earth-red caused by ripples and mini-dunes on top of the big one.
The plane could hardly be placed better.
That is a wonderful spot. My feet are itching to go hike there.
The second image has the benefit of that great natural tearshaped frame. A real photographer's image.
But I actually prefer the first because of the general composition of the whole image: a pillared frame of big mountains that surrounds a natural landmark in the form of a lonely free standing rock, and that one then against a backdrop of layers of distant mountains with receding blue hues. The kind of photo I would be happy about for days if I had made it.
My initial impression was that I wanted to see this cropped for more emphasis on the angel.
But that initial feeling was quickly discarded when I started exploring the whole image, realizing that all the elements have their place here.
A bit of empty foreground to create a sense of distance and separation between the natural and the spiritual worlds.
The tombstones, anonymous to the side.
The angel placed at 2/3s of the horizontal frame but with another ratio than 2/3 in the vertical plane, suggesting that there is more in the sky than just sky.
The skeletal trees creating a laced veil, but with an opening towards clear sky, placed nicely diagonally from the angel.
So don't change a thing, please.
When we were in Lyon, I did not go inside the Musée des Confluences. On the first day, we were on our way to another place (Le Grand Loco, for the Biennale).
On the second day, I raced the evening sun to the spot, and frankly, the weather and light was just too nice to consider stepping inside.
Your image tells me that we need to revisit Lyon someday and give the interior a chance.
I do like the lines in your image and can see what you were going for, but unfortunately I am not 100% convinced.
I still feel like the exterior is the more interesting part of the architecture.
This view feels like something out of The Matrix: through a small window in a uniform and rigid reality of steel, concrete and glass, we get a glimpse of another dimension that is more organic. (Still a lot of buildings, but some plants too - I am imagining this same image, but then with a view towards a lush forest through the gap - how cool would that be...?)
The funny thing is that even that rigid uniformity of the building façade is not all that uniform at all, upon further scrutiny.
Individual inhabitants are customizing their space with terrace furniture etc.
(I always think that architects of this kind of modernist buildings imagine their creation as pristine and flawless, shiny and anonymous.
And then a troupe of neanderthal cave dwellers descends upon it and make their little cozy homes and out goes the formalism.)
No, I haven't seen your photo in Street because I have not (yet) looked at that forum.
We've seen this phenomenon of "traditional dress for hire" in many places in Asia.
It adds to the atmosphere.
And at one occasion, we have seen the hilarious effect of European tourism discovering that trend and catering to Asian tourists.
In Cesky Krumlow, an achingly picturesque medieval town in the Czech Republic, with an imposing castle dominating cobblestoned streets and crooked houses, all with the embrace of a meander of a river, we encountered a few groups of Chinese selfie-makers in European medieval dress. Hard to keep a straight face.