Good idea for adding something interesting to a darker room. Both shots look great. I‘m amazed those stars are as sharply defined. I‘bve never experimented with that… guess I‘ll have to stop down one of my lenses for a change? 😅
Initially I thought this shot might work better when cropped (because the lower third is pretty busy as well) but after some consideration I think you've done the right thing with the nice diagonal the bridge and yellow house provide in the composition. I'd still crop it (very slightly) from below because that bright skylight doesn't add anything and I'd probably also darken that white area in the left corner slightly in post. The more I look at it, the more I think you did an excellent job composing and capturing that scene because it certainly is a challenging one - well done!
Thanks a lot! It would be unfair if I'd call it lens limitations, because I significantly tilted a lens here, which was never intended to be used for that. I've tried to crop it some more initially to get rid of the dark corners, but then I thought I don't mind it at all. It's not meant to look natural as you can probably see in a number of aspects.
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I really appreciate your input.
These images were all cropped a tiny bit (if only to get verticals straight; I am a lousy straight-keeper while shooting).
But I have kept the original ratio (4:3 on my phone).
However, you make a compelling argument for cropping the first image to square. That is IMHO your best advice.
Also your suggestion for the second image is a valid one, but I would not want to lose the left most tower (absent from #3).
I like the idea of this image very much Mike.
I think there is a small amount of barrel distortion from the lens in this image. I would also apply a very small amount of perspective correction to the horizontals and verticals. I have included two versions of this above, since I pouched the posting here somehow. One with just the corrections and a second to which I applied some contrast changes to the image via a preset in ON1 Effects, Ai. For me it brings out the wood grains in the structure and adds more interest. Somewhat shockingly I had not noticed the background behind what I assume are windows. If it is in fact windows, a stunning view lies behind. It could however be a painted scene!
Strauss Bascule Bridge in Port Lands section of Toronto, Canada. Moveable type of bridge built in 1930 and still in operation is constantly requiring service due to complicated mechanism. Mr. Strauss is also credited with design of suspension type - Golden Gate Bridge in San Francisco, California which was unveiled in 1937.
Lots of thanks Andrew. You are correct on all points and your version of my shot is a big improvement. I've never put much effort into learning the finer points of vertical/horizontal PP correction and your work here is a clear demonstration that I need to. It's an image that lives on having this right. What program did you use?
You are correct in your suspicions about the rear window. It's a painting.
Roel and Rich have recently posted shots of porches so they were in my mind as well when I contributed this take. Japanese aesthetics very much hit my buttons. me.
A great photo made even more delicious with the text.
The X composition is doing a perfect job of highlighting our Tom Sawyer. As if this wasn't already perfect, the silver V of the wake does it again. The lighting and darker background ensure that the rod and net are easily seen to complete the story.
It's hard to see the appeal of school.
Thanks for this post.
IMHO photographers should pay more attention to art traditions and discussions of painting. There are multi centuries of insights on visual literacy to be mined. Chiaroscuro and its sidekick tenebrism should be part of the awareness of all photographers.
I prefer 2 in that I feel it is a better example of what chiarosco attempts to achieve. The balance of light to dark in 1 is already about even. In 2, the proportion of bright is considerably smaller and the sunstar positioning keeps it with the brighter leaves. I'm not arguing that 2 is necessarily a better photo than 1, just that 2 is a better example of the chiaroscura concept.
I use PSP2023 Mike. This is a Corel program. I think the company has abandoned its photo software since there have been no new releases since then. You can still buy it and likely for around $50. Not sure I would go that route as I suspect you have software already that can do it. Corel is very easy to use for this purpose. A rectangle appears on the image when you chose the perspective control mode and you just line up each of those lines with verticals and horizontals, at least the ones you want to be either. Try to pick lines closer to the sides of the frame if possible. Pretty simple really and if you don't get the result you like, undo is your friend and try again!
Long ago I used LR but it did not have a tool for that use then. Today I suspect it does.
Andrew