I like your shots, they look interesting and authentic, which is something I can appreciate. For some reason however I'm not quite sure about the story you want to convey in a couple of them... This is one such example to me. Would you mind explaining what you had in mind when taking this shot and what you were focusing on/want the viewer to focus on?
Depending on the answer it could be great as it is, or perhaps there's some room for alternate edits...
It's great in B&W, but I think some tones get lost a little bit... Here's a quick (cropped) attempt at managing different areas in a way I interpreted the importance of them in the image:
Of course that might be way off, so I'm looking forward to hearing your thoughts/Intentions!