It has a slightly disturbing vibe to it for me. Maybe coming from that look on the main character's face?
For some reason the line near the end of the book "1984" immediately came to mind,...
"Under the spreading chestnut tree, I sold you and you sold me"
I am wishing for you to get untangled what is now tangled.
But if we are exploring this visual metaphor, there is hope.
The main line (diagonal) runs true and strong.
The tangled fishing lines are a distraction, but they cannot compete with the main line.
And in that top left corner (like thinking almost outside the box) there is another avenue.
When obstructions come in our path, there are often more than one solution:
- we can (try to) ignore the obstruction and bulldoze right through
- or we can (try to) solve obstruction (with careful puzzling or with a slash through the Gordian knot)
- or we can (try to) find another way to continue our journey, around the obstruction.
Sassoon Docks is a fishing harbour and fish market in Mumbai (Bombay) and although I arrived there shortly after sunrise, the day's work was almost done.
The last boats were still unloading their catch, ....
... but most was already in crates on the quay.
Buyers were inspecting the fish and haggling over the price ....
... others were carefully choosing their fish, but had no intention of paying a price.
It wasn't just one bird. More and more were attracted by the easy fishing, ......
.... selected their prize and flew away.
Until the fish sellers decided the birds had had their share of the fish.
A beautifully constructed vignette of a place and time.
The day, the sellers, the customers (of various kinds) and interactions. "Yellow" provides links between many of the images.
3 is noteably composed with the positioning of the V of the crate and the eyes of the fishes.
5 reverses the V, directs us to other eyes and begins a mini story within the overall sequence.
The last shots delivers an emphatic conclusion.
A general response to the comments on these shots. Fireplace and Roel have summed up my uncertainty about my preference. Incidentally, I think the animal is a cat. I'm very tempted to crop the second into a square format, removing the cat and man on the right and leaving only the 5 figures on the left. But I couldn't quite bring myself to remove the cat with its intense interest on the catch.
What do y'all think?
Nice closeup of a single seed and its webby zippered seam in the process of opening itself up. The V shaped bokeh behind echoes the shape of the webby seam. I don't agree with the comment about using a smaller aperture. I don't know your new camera but with most m43's you'd likely end up with a messy background if you'd chosen the aperture suggested.