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Edit an image #70 - comments on the pictures submitted

AlanSh
June 10, 2026
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    AlanSh
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    June 10, 2026, 11:32 a.m. June 10, 2026, 11:32 a.m.
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    Over the next few posts, I'll try and be "the judge" for each of the images you posted. Feel free to reply with your comments.

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    AlanSh
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    June 10, 2026, 11:34 a.m. June 10, 2026, 11:34 a.m.
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    @Stormyboy has written:

    Went for cropped and gritty.

    EB010137.jpg

    The person at the back with the hi-viz is distracting. My eyes are led to him (her?) by following the arms. And the shadow is cut off.

    But the isolation is good and the "gritty" works well.

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    AlanSh
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    June 10, 2026, 11:35 a.m. June 10, 2026, 11:35 a.m.
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    @Sagittarius has written:

    Ghost of the skater

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    As an image it's interesting, but I can't see the context in relation to the title (titles are important in competitions). How do we know it's a skater?

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    AlanSh
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    June 10, 2026, 11:37 a.m. June 10, 2026, 11:37 a.m.
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    @ArvoJ has written:

    Disconnected

    editme70_DxO_1.jpg

    DXO PL9 Velvia rendering, some dynamics adjustments, geometry, crop

    Good for isolating the suject, but there's too much going on in the background and it's distracting me.

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    AlanSh
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    June 10, 2026, 11:39 a.m. June 10, 2026, 11:39 a.m.
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    @Sagittarius has written:

    Running from the shade

    EB010137-2.jpg

    Darkened and blurred background, cropped to remove part of the statue, brought up details in skaters pants.

    I actually liked this one a lot. But it didn't get the votes, so it didn't win. The subject is there and you can see a blur of something in the background - an audience maybe? I think it would have done well in the competition.

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    AlanSh
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    June 10, 2026, 11:40 a.m. June 10, 2026, 11:40 a.m.
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    @ErikWithaK has written:

    My take from the jpeg (my old computer won't open X-E5 RAW files). Went the monochrome route, seemed appropriate here....

    eb010137-supersi edit.jpg

    I love the B&W but as I said above, the background is distracting. Judges don't like distractions.

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    AlanSh
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    June 10, 2026, 11:41 a.m. June 10, 2026, 11:41 a.m.
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    @Stormyboy has written:

    Same crop as before, less grit, sns-hdr program.

    EB010137-2.jpg

    Same comments as above

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    AlanSh
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    June 10, 2026, 11:43 a.m. June 10, 2026, 11:43 a.m.
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    @Stormyboy has written:

    Third and last version from me: Dithered Skater

    EB010137-3.jpg

    Love the isolation. It would do really well in a competition. But maybe it just needs some background to bring out the skateboarder's location.

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    AlanSh
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    June 10, 2026, 11:44 a.m. June 10, 2026, 11:44 a.m.
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    @ArvoJ has written:

    Disconnected II

    editme70_DxO_3.jpg

    DXO PL9 default rendering, curves, geometry, crop

    A good intepretation. But i want to see more of the person. It would probably do well in a comp.

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    AlanSh
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    June 10, 2026, 11:46 a.m. June 10, 2026, 11:46 a.m.
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    @NCV has written:

    Pychadelic

    EB010137.jpg

    The image has been rotated a bit and this put me off. But I like the purple contrasting with the persons hat - that works well.

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    AlanSh
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    June 10, 2026, 11:47 a.m. June 10, 2026, 11:47 a.m.
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    @Greg has written:

    x1.jpg

    Ouch. Too overexposed and all the distractions in the background. Sorry, but this wouldn't do well.

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    AlanSh
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    June 10, 2026, 11:49 a.m. June 10, 2026, 11:49 a.m.
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    @NCV has written:

    Even more

    EB010137_1.jpg

    Same comments as above, but I think the change in colours of the clothes as worked well and improves it.

    Alan

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    ErikWithaK
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    June 10, 2026, 3:33 p.m. June 10, 2026, 3:33 p.m.
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    @AlanSh has written:
    @ErikWithaK has written:

    My take from the jpeg (my old computer won't open X-E5 RAW files). Went the monochrome route, seemed appropriate here....

    eb010137-supersi edit.jpg

    I love the B&W but as I said above, the background is distracting. Judges don't like distractions.

    Well, I completely disagree about that. In this case and, unlike with some of the other edits, the background is both darker and softer than the subject and, being B&W, there are no distracting color blobs either. I intentionally processed the background the way I did to add depth and context. You can like it or hate it, but that was my thinking here.

    RonP and AlanSh like this.

    favorite 2

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    AlanSh
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    June 10, 2026, 4:24 p.m. June 10, 2026, 4:24 p.m.
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    @ErikWithaK has written:

    Well, I completely disagree about that. In this case and, unlike with some of the other edits, the background is both darker and softer than the subject and, being B&W, there are no distracting color blobs either. I intentionally processed the background the way I did to add depth and context. You can like it or hate it, but that was my thinking here.

    That's fine. Everyone has a different opinion of what judges say. You should hear the discussions we have at the club after a competition night. I was just trying to put out what I thought the judge of the night would have said, based on what he said about all our pictures that night.

    Anyway, over to you for the next one.

    Cheers

    Alan

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    RonP
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    June 11, 2026, 7:01 a.m. June 11, 2026, 7:01 a.m.
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    @ErikWithaK has written:

    Well, I completely disagree about that. In this case and, unlike with some of the other edits, the background is both darker and softer than the subject and, being B&W, there are no distracting color blobs either. I intentionally processed the background the way I did to add depth and context. You can like it or hate it, but that was my thinking here.

    This is a very good job !
    Strong dynamics, plenty of the context well underlined, and a lot of complementary detail.
    It works. Main figure possibly a little oversharp against all those other tones.

    Ron

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