• Members 768 posts
    May 31, 2023, 6:54 a.m.

    Welcome to the Wednesday Comments and Critique (No Theme & No Brand) thread!

    We are dedicated to continuing the great tradition of this C&C thread because we are convinced that looking at, and talking about images is vital for better photography.

    Our tried and tested concept (15 years and running!) is a weekly "peer-to-peer" photo comments & critique encounter, in which you GIVE and RECEIVE.

    The idea is simple: you post an image and get critique on it, and in return give other people your opinion of their images, or vice versa.

    Any Theme, Any Camera, Any Style, Any Subject.

    We are still figuring out how to create the convenience of threaded view on this new forum.
    For now, let us agree that you post an image with a title and short explanation, and that all comments include the image as a quote.
    Replies to comments may or may not include quotes.

    THREAD GUIDELINES – THE SHORT & SWEET VERSION
    • This thread does not care about brands. It’s not about the tool, but the image.
    • Post one image that you would like to get comments on (exceptions: see below).
    • Change the title of your post to reflect the image’s title.
    • Look at the other images and give your comments on at least one of those.
    • For comments, try to go beyond a simple pat on the back or a short dismissal.
    • Do you like an image (or essay) ? Try to explain WHY it appeals to you.
    • Negative feedback is OK (we all want to learn), but be polite and constructive. Try to explain why the image (or essay) does not appeal to you and how it might be improved.

    We will start with single images. Re-establishing our C&C for essays will be a next step.
    Please limit any individual contribution to a single image. This avoids confusion.

    The critique you give is vital.
    What was your first impression? What catches your eye about an image?
    Why? What do you like, and what distracts you? What would you change?

    Fiddle with the image in your head - composition, perspective, color balance, exposure.
    It is understood that unless the original poster specifically states that they do not want an altered image posted that you are free to alter the posted image and repost it in a reply for C&C purposes (no use for other purposes!). That reposted image may remain permanently or you may remove it after a short period of time if you prefer. No copyright disputes here!

    More general feedback is also welcome.
    Do you know something about taking the same sort of image that would make matters easier - share your own as an example in your reply. Encourage - it is a scary business putting your work up for other people to judge!

    And finally, here are some useful hints for navigating and familiarizing yourself with the forum mechanics of DPRevived:
    • Unfortunately, there is no threaded view (yet). We can’t simply keep images and their related comments together like we used to. So please make clear about which image you are commenting.
    • To do that, you may make good use of the “quote” feature. This allows you to keep the image in your reply. Excess content can be deleted. The “preview” button allows you to look at what you are going to post.
    • There is a difference between the “reply” button that sits at the top of the forum, and the reply buttons under every post.

    • A few threads in this new forum with useful navigation information:
    dprevived.com/t/how-to-use-this-site/387/
    and
    dprevived.com/t/how-to-embed-photos-into-your-post-directly-from-flickr/456/
    (this applies also, with modifications, to other photo hosting websites)
    and
    dprevived.com/t/how-to-quote/1014/

    Have fun and let’s stick together!

  • Members 768 posts
    May 31, 2023, 7:15 a.m.

    BROTHERS

    A couple of years ago and with a few years inbetween, I made three documentary series about life in small travelling family circuses. I just approached these people and asked them if I could be a fly on their wall (or rather: on their tent canvas) for a few days.

    The most extensive series was the last one: roelh.zenfolio.com/p1039041345

    Here's an image from that series.
    The two sons of the circus director are having a break between their numerous short acts.
    They are woven throughout the show, filling up the time between other acts that require some setting up of props.

    roelh.zenfolio.com/img/s/v-10/p1722984381-6.jpg

  • Members 1216 posts
    May 31, 2023, 9:25 a.m.

    TOOLS OF TRADE

    Visiting Aberfoyle Antique Market recently I came across this assembly of various implements from the past...

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    20230521_124552x.jpg

    JPG, 3.9 MB, uploaded by ChrisOly on May 31, 2023.

  • Members 1216 posts
    May 31, 2023, 9:36 a.m.

    Oh I like that. Those 2 individuals dressed very appropriately and bathed in great light, amazing shadows and bright background. It all adds up to a very engaging photo. And taken with E-5 to boot! Excellent!

  • Members 707 posts
    May 31, 2023, 10:04 a.m.

    Roel,

    What a wonderful shot!

    Congratulations.

    Steve Thomas

  • Members 1316 posts
    May 31, 2023, 11:33 a.m.

    Sweet Dreams.
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    sweet dreams.jpg

    JPG, 1.5 MB, uploaded by MikeFewster on May 31, 2023.

  • Members 1216 posts
    May 31, 2023, 12:38 p.m.

    Ha, good one for a quick street shot. One can imagine what this individual is contemplating - snack, drink, girl, better future. Dreams are limitless...

  • Members 523 posts
    May 31, 2023, 2:04 p.m.

    Job Security

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    IMG 1776 crop 2.jpg

    JPG, 5.5 MB, uploaded by LindaS on May 31, 2023.

  • Members 1522 posts
    May 31, 2023, 2:18 p.m.

    The Garlic Patch
    When I'm at the country house, I post photos of much of nothing, with minimal editing, always an interesting challenge .

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    _5281049.jpeg

    JPG, 1.6 MB, uploaded by minniev on May 31, 2023.

  • Members 676 posts
    May 31, 2023, 2:37 p.m.

    City Lights

    Variation 2.1 Post Version.jpg

    WhyNot

    Variation 2.1 Post Version.jpg

    JPG, 1.3 MB, uploaded by WhyNot on May 31, 2023.

  • Members 1662 posts
    May 31, 2023, 2:56 p.m.

    Looks good - not something I would go for in terms of processing with a shot like that, but indeed - whynot? Looks unusual and interesting - I like it.

    It also helps that I like the composition. I would get rid of the two cables at the top though!

  • Members 1737 posts
    May 31, 2023, 2:58 p.m.

    The picture:

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    The picture behind the picture:

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    JPG, 356.7 KB, uploaded by JimKasson on May 31, 2023.

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    JPG, 223.8 KB, uploaded by JimKasson on May 31, 2023.

  • Members 676 posts
    May 31, 2023, 3:06 p.m.

    Forgot the QUOTE!!!! This is in response to MIKE's Post -- SWEET DREAMS

    I like the idea ... and the picture ... That everything is leaning makes me want to lean back with them!!!!

    WhyNot

  • Members 861 posts
    May 31, 2023, 3:06 p.m.

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    dscf0502_$25_72dpi_web.jpg

    JPG, 4.4 MB, uploaded by OpenCube on May 31, 2023.

  • Members 676 posts
    May 31, 2023, 3:31 p.m.

    Since this is an interpretation of the landscape I am looking for a meaning or idea … and haven't decided on one yet .. I think that since you took liberties with those lenticular clouds (generally we only see the top of the wave) that you would have abstracted the foreground more to give an idealize landscape ... I'd go somewhere like this .... but I may presume to much ..... sorry about that ....

    Interpretation.jpg

    WhyNot

    Interpretation.jpg

    JPG, 474.4 KB, uploaded by WhyNot on May 31, 2023.

  • Members 676 posts
    May 31, 2023, 3:34 p.m.

    Thank you for the critique ..... Actually I left those lines in deliberately as part of the story ....

    WhyNot

  • Members 1737 posts
    May 31, 2023, 3:46 p.m.

    Not sure what you mean by that. It was an IR capture.

  • Members 1737 posts
    May 31, 2023, 3:48 p.m.

    I think the subtlety is now AWOL.