• Members 1576 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 12:23 p.m.


    Welcome to the Wednesday Comments and Critique (No Theme & No Brand) thread!

    We are dedicated to continuing the great tradition of this C&C thread because we are convinced that looking at, and talking about images is vital for better photography.

    Our tried and tested concept (15 years and running!) is a weekly "peer-to-peer" photo comments & critique encounter, in which you GIVE and RECEIVE.

    The idea is simple: you post an image and get critique on it, and in return give other people your opinion of their images, or vice versa.

    Any Theme, Any Camera, Any Style, Any Subject.

    We are still figuring out how to create the convenience of threaded view on this new forum. For now, let us agree that you post an image with a title and short explanation, and that all comments include the image as a quote. Replies to comments may or may not include quotes.

    *THREAD GUIDELINES – THE SHORT & SWEET VERSION
    *This thread does not care about brands. It’s not about the tool, but the image.
    Post one image that you would like to get comments on (exceptions: see below).
    Add a clear title to your post to reflect the image’s title and distinguish your entry.
    Look at the other images and give your comments on at least one of those.
    For comments, try to go beyond a simple pat on the back or a short dismissal.
    Do you like an image (or essay) ? Try to explain WHY it appeals to you.
    Negative feedback is OK (we all want to learn), but be polite and constructive. Try to explain why the image (or essay) does not appeal to you and how it might be improved.

    We will start with single images.
    Re-establishing our C&C for essays will be a next step.
    Please limit any individual contribution to a single image.
    This avoids confusion.

    The critique you give is vital.
    What was your first impression? What catches your eye about an image? Why?
    What do you like, and what distracts you? What would you change?

    Fiddle with the image in your head - composition, perspective, color balance, exposure.

    PLEASE NOTE CLEARLY:
    It is understood that unless the original poster specifically states that they do not want an altered image posted that you are free to alter the posted image and repost it in a reply for C&C purposes (no use for other purposes!). That reposted image may remain permanently or you may remove it after a short period of time if you prefer. No copyright disputes here!

    More general feedback is also welcome.
    Do you know something about taking the same sort of image that would make matters easier - share your own as an example in your reply. Encourage - it is a scary business putting your work up for other people to judge!

    And finally, here are some useful hints for navigating and familiarizing yourself with the forum mechanics of DPRevived:
    Unfortunately, there is no threaded view (yet). We can’t simply keep images and their related comments together like we used to. So please make clear about which image you are commenting.
    To do that, you may make good use of the “quote” feature. This allows you to keep the image in your reply. Excess content can be deleted. The “preview” button allows you to look at what you are going to post.
    There is a difference between the “reply” button that sits at the top of the forum, and the reply buttons under every post.
    A few threads in this new forum with useful navigation information:
    dprevived.com/t/how-to-use-this-site/387/
    and
    dprevived.com/t/how-to-embed-photos-into-your-post-directly-from-flickr/456/
    (this applies, also, with modifications, to other photo hosting websites)
    and
    dprevived.com/t/how-to-quote/1014/

    Have fun and let’s stick together!

  • Members 1576 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 12:31 p.m.

    Since I was too sick last week to wield a camera or even care, I'm playing Lightroom Catalog Roulette this week. And the roulette wheel landed, unsurprisingly, on one of the many unedited dam bird images that live on my external photo drive. A disheveled egret sits just out of reach of the strange ectoplasm of light that sometimes appears in the mornings as the sun makes its way through the gates that control water flow below.
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    JPG, 2.5 MB, uploaded by minniev on Jan. 10, 2024.

  • Members 861 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 4:11 p.m.

    "Until It's All Black"
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    untilitsallblack.jpg

    JPG, 2.9 MB, uploaded by OpenCube on Jan. 10, 2024.

  • Members 676 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 4:25 p.m.

    Musician #1 Drummer ......

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    Quiet morning on C&C!!!

    WhyNot

    Music #1.jpg

    JPG, 959.4 KB, uploaded by WhyNot on Jan. 10, 2024.

  • Members 676 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 4:41 p.m.

    Interesting ... but one of the least abstract or dreamscape of your posts here. ... Not sure about the idea behind these .. I like to look at Mondrian, Kelly, Pollock at the museums but the El Greco and Goya stay with me and present ideas that I can ponder ... interested in where you are going with these ... and that avatar now that Halloween is long past .....

    WhyNot

  • Members 1662 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 4:50 p.m.

    Hope you feel better now!

    That's a wonderful shot. I love the B&W processing (beautiful subtle nuances in there) and feel like it strengthens the impact of the light even more. It almost looks like it is reaching for the bird. The poor thing doesn't know its time has come... or pehaps it does, but is prepared and ready... Fantastic capture!

  • Members 1662 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 4:53 p.m.
  • Members 861 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 5:02 p.m.

    That makes two of us, lol. I don't know, I'm exploring. So far the testing with this idea in the alpha stages has been overwhelmingly disappointing, but that's the alpha stage for ya. I think I need a larger scope, and some tweaks on a few things, some of which I'm not sure is possible. Spent a few quid this morning to go a bit further with the idea. May the packages from China arrive quickly.

  • Members 704 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 5:51 p.m.

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    Politically Neutral, Carlsbad, CA

    Rich

    Politically-Neutral.jpg

    JPG, 3.8 MB, uploaded by Rich42 on Jan. 10, 2024.

  • Members 783 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 5:55 p.m.
  • Members 1399 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 8:22 p.m.

    Swifts.
    In the alley ways of Lecce.
    In early morning and late light, on the roof of my apartment, I found that these birds flashed through very close to the top of my head. Could I get a photo? Generally, I couldn't.
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    JPG, 531.3 KB, uploaded by MikeFewster on Jan. 10, 2024.

    Swifts. With tree and wall.jpg

    JPG, 239.9 KB, uploaded by MikeFewster on Jan. 10, 2024.

    Swift with GD.jpg

    JPG, 428.3 KB, uploaded by MikeFewster on Jan. 10, 2024.

    Swifts. Incoming.jpg

    JPG, 336.3 KB, uploaded by MikeFewster on Jan. 10, 2024.

  • Members 533 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 9:35 p.m.

    Waiting to Fly

    In the last few months I have been through Frankfurt Airport a number of times, and not all for good reasons. I took this with my phone on the way to the departure gate.

    Pete
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    JPG, 917.9 KB, uploaded by PeteS on Jan. 10, 2024.

  • Members 533 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 9:57 p.m.

    I'll join in with both those sentiments.

    The ghostly veil reaching towards the bird is great. It is open to interpretation whether it will do harm or good to the bird, and that uncertainty is an important element in this photo's success.

    Pete

  • Members 533 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 10:18 p.m.

    Red is a prominent colour, but it does not give this image its usual optimistic and lively feeling. Instead it has a sombre and slightly macabre feeling, and I am not sure why. Most red tones are faded and the leaves are well past their best, so I suppose that sets the scene. The dark black-blue background adds to it.
    In any case I like the processing and also the slicing and reassembly of the image too.
    It makes me stop and pay attention and I like it very much.

    Pete

  • Members 533 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 10:30 p.m.

    An improvised drum kit of empty tubs and sticks gives this a good vibe, and the processing fits the subject.
    It looks as though he will soon liven up the quiet morning!

    Pete

  • Members 533 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 10:38 p.m.

    I like the reflections, the lighting of the background and the textures in the orange light. It is all good, but it doesn't thrill me as much as most of your other contributions have. Maybe because it is immediately obvious that it's a light-bulb, and your usual visual riddles are missing.

    Pete

  • Members 533 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 10:41 p.m.

    The image is a fine graphical one, but made all the more enjoyable by your amusing political twist on the colours. Obviously a very undecided owner, since the house numbers are the same. Maybe they use the door according to their mood or the effect of the day's headlines.

    Pete

  • Members 533 posts
    Jan. 10, 2024, 10:43 p.m.